Final crit

As in each module we have a final presentation of our final piece, finished or not, to receive constructive criticism that we can use to tweak our work before submission, here are the minutes of my crit.

Issue Discussed

Shot framing

in a few sections of my animation the character isn't framed right, he is outside the 'action safe zone' which gives you a guide as to where to condense the action into.

The ending

the ending stops way too abruptly, it cuts the end of the audio and makes it look unfinished.

The camera

i wanted feedback on the camera angles, wether they provide good coverage of the facial animation.

Student action

I will enable the action safe zone to see where i can adjust the camera to make it look more aesthetically appealing

im going to add 48 frames to the end of my animation to give enough room to finish the scene, to have moom assuming the fetal position and letting the animation come to an end

i will adjust the camera to stay close to his face on the first line to show his facial expressions in the first line of dialogue.