Final Boards!
After assessing my peer feedback I made some crucial adjustments to my boards that would help me better reach the judges and to answer the brief in a more appropriate way!
Straight away the main criticism was the lack of text assisting my explanation so I added text along all boards.
I was also advised to add different examples of where the animations would appear!
There was a brief discussion about the illustrations, how they were too bold and distracted one from the content. so I knocked down the opacity of the illustrations and I saw how much of a difference it makes! it definitely makes my boards look more professional.
I added a fourth board to be able to incorporate a type of storyboard as some of my peers asked what the animations actually are, this board help me show what the content of the animations was.
I am much happier with the new version of the boards as they look a lot more professional and get a lot of the content across. this would not have been possible without my peers reviewing them and giving me constructive criticism, this not only showed me how important having a second opinion is but also how important collaborating is, because if I can improve my boards by someone just giving me their opinion then who knows what could be accomplished with more of that persons time devoted to the same cause.
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